{"id":6186,"date":"2022-01-30T21:34:10","date_gmt":"2022-01-30T21:34:10","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.comedyville.ca\/?p=6186"},"modified":"2025-10-15T01:23:56","modified_gmt":"2025-10-15T05:23:56","slug":"how-to-write-a-comedy-joke-that-works","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.comedyville.ca\/how-to-write-a-comedy-joke-that-works\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write a Comedy Joke That Works"},"content":{"rendered":"

You can walk into any comedy club in Montreal and you\u2019ll see a mix of new and experienced comics trying to make the audience laugh, or cringe, or cry\u2026from laughter. Hundreds of comics have passed through the doors here at Comedyville<\/a> and hundreds of punch lines have landed and made audiences snort or laugh or sometimes both. But behind those hundreds of successful punch lines are thousands and thousands of punch lines that did not work. So, how does anyone write a comedy joke that works? It\u2019s easy\u2026just dive into the pain!<\/p>\n

Watching a comic tell a good joke is like watching a car drive by. Seems pretty simple from the outside\u2026just some seats and a cage rolling by on 4 tires, big deal. But when you actually look at all the components of the engine and suspension that have to function in order for that car to defy physics and roll forward, it becomes clear that this is a well-oiled (hopefully) machine that has a lot going on behind the scenes. That\u2019s exactly what a comic goes through to craft a good joke!<\/p>\n

On the surface, he looks calm and ready (my friend bet me I couldn\u2019t get an Eminem quote into a blog\u2026pay up, Justin) but if you hopped into a time machine to see the journey a comic goes through, you\u2019ll see it all started with some clacking on a keyboard or an organic conversation or an experience that triggered a funny idea. From there, the pain begins. Pain can mean different things to different people. But pain to a Montreal stand-up comic is silence. Pain is presenting an idea that\u2019s funny to you and then receiving a blank stare back from the audience. But it\u2019s within this horrible pain that the (at this point) \u201cbad\u201d joke begins to evolve.<\/p>\n

A comic could easily throw that joke away and move on to another one but if they know there\u2019s a nugget of funny in there then they begin to mold it. You can adjust the timing, or reword some parts to give it a better flow and each adjustment brings the joke closer to eliciting that elusive mouth noise comics chase every time they step foot on a stage, laughter.<\/p>\n

Can you sit down and write out a hilarious joke on the first try and then deliver it on stage to uproarious laughter right away? Yes, but you have a better chance of meeting your celebrity crush, getting them to fall madly in love with you, and run away from the fame to start a dairy farm in Idaho. So, next time you\u2019re watching a comedy show at Comedyville and you hear a good joke that makes you laugh just know that that joke works because the comic army crawled through the pain until they found what works. So, if you want to write a joke that works, step one is to actually write something down that makes you laugh. Step two is to walk onto that stage and dive into the pain. And, finally, step three is to experience the evolution of your joke from infancy to hilarity.<\/p>\n

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Post by Jonathan Motney<\/strong>
\n<\/em>Jonathan has been writing and performing comedy in the DFW area for over 5 years. He looks to continue contributing to the comedy world until he becomes unfunny due to age and\/or fatherhood.<\/p>\n

Post exclusively contributed to Comedyville.ca<\/a>, All rights reserved.
\nComedyville is a Comedy Club located in Downtown Montreal.
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